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Essay Service
What‘s the difference between a California Bar Exam Essay that receives a score of 55 and an essay that receives a score of 75? Passing the test! Do you know what has to be in that essay? How it should be organized? The level of analysis that must be given? What to include and what need not be developed? How to apportion your time? Among other deficiencies, low scoring essays omit information and fail to present the material in a lawyer-like fashion.
Sample Graded Essay
Below is an example of a graded essay
Test Logistics |
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| Question: | Real Property - 12 | Breakdown: | ||
| Date: | 12/01/08 | Issue Spotting: | 65 | |
| Score: | 60 | Rule Identification: | 50 | |
| Pass/Fail: | Fail | Analysis: | 55 | |
| Last Score: | Conclusion: | 60 | ||
BarEducators Comments:
*Note this is an excerpt.
- This exam received a score of 60 and it is not a pass.
- You omitted five of the major issues being tested by the Examiners.
- Better organization is required and you need to fully develop the adverse possession and prescriptive easement sections. [See the in essay comments in red]
- You need to list and explain each of the elements.
- Your writing fails to draw a conclusion on the ultimate call of the question.
- Remember to answer the questions posed by the bar.
How Does Our Essay Service Work?
The Essay grading service is easy. Essays are submitted over the internet and to BarEducators by email. Take them anytime, anywhere you have computer access.
Step 1. Request An Essay
Step 2. Take the timed examination and return it to BarEducators.
Step 3. It will be graded with a score and comments and returned to you.
It’s that easy!

